In Asian countries, a child’s achievement is traditionally deemed as a part of family glory. Thus, an interesting discussion has arisen: are….?
「亞洲人將子女的成就看成家族榮耀」的【現像】作開始…「揭示」出…
Nowadays, in the wake of increasing competitive workplace environment, a multitude of office workers are exposed to a great deal of working pressure. In order to relax…
「日趨激烈的商場競爭」的【現像】作開始…「揭示」出…
Imagine such a scene: a wife want to get advices about family matters from her husband. The husband has his mind, however, stuffed with only football matches and his favourite team, leaving his wife indifferent …
切入一個「老公不理老婆」的現像情境…「揭示」出…
所以，要掌握第一個鋪墊就是【現】–>【揭】。
2. 【他】他人評論
想想一些人的普遍看法、或是引用諺語(這個作文Content要拿高分，非熟悉不可！)。
It is commonly believed that young people are the driving force to society progress…
however…
「提出一些人認為:年青人是社會進步的動力」為開始，進行【反面立論】
It is universally acknowledged that new things keep emerging in the world we live today… So…
「提出一些常識」為開始，進行【正面立論】
As an old saying goes, ‘Rome was not built in a day’…Thus,
Secondly, the addiction to football match can be detrimental to family harmony. （理由:沉迷球賽導致家庭不和）….然後做個【現】現象切入,作例子。
Imagine such a scene: a wife want to get advices about family matters from her husband. The husband has his mind, however, stuffed with only football matches and his favourite team, leaving his wife indifferent …
Admittedly, I am not saying that all people should keep themselves away from others…After all, all people in the society need one another in a certain extent…（承認漏洞+堵漏）
